Timing Matters
Send your LOCI as soon as you get the decision to be waitlisted. Demonstrating eagerness and proactive engagement makes the admission committee understand that you are really serious about attending their institution. The early response ensures that your letter gets considered early in the process.
Express Gratitude and Continued Interest
Start your letter by thanking the admissions committee for their time and consideration of your application. Reiterate your keen interest in attending their school and let them know why it is still your first choice. Be specific, citing specific programs, professors, or campus opportunities that align with your goals and make the institution a perfect fit for you.
Provide Meaningful Updates
Include updates about any major achievements, awards, or experiences that have occurred since your original application was submitted. Highlight those achievements that are in line with the values of the school or your field of study, for such demonstrates continued interest in personal and academic development.
Add New Insights
If you have one aspect of your application that was weaker, you may want to briefly address it in your LOCI. Mention how you have grown or improved in that area, showing that you learn and adapt. This is optional, but if you can pull it off thoughtfully, it enhances your case.
Highlight Your Potential Contributions
Take this opportunity to tell them what differentiates you from others and your contribution to school life. Briefly explain how your background, experiences, or talents will help make campus life better and demonstrate further why you are a great fit for the institution.
Proofread Carefully
Grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors can make an otherwise professional letter much less so. Proofread your LOCI several times carefully, and give a teacher, mentor, or friend a chance to read it for clarity and accuracy. A polished letter shows your attention to detail and seriousness about the opportunity.
Keep it Concise
Stick to one page. Make sure the message is clear, concise, and organized; do not let quantity overpower quality. Do not use redundant phrases or flowery language that has no effect.
Choose Your Tone
Your LOCI should sound professional, respectful, and enthusiastic. Steer clear of appearing too desperate or overly emotional because it might detract from your credibility. Be genuinely passionate and confident in your fit with the school.
Consider a Counselor Recommendation
If your high school counselor is supportive of your application, ask them to write a brief recommendation to accompany your LOCI. This can add weight to your case and provide further context to your qualifications.